In class we read a narrative by Jamiaca Kincade “Girl” and this was my verse after her fashion.
BOY
Did you brush your teeth and wash your face? Go, go back and brush your teeth and wash your face. You are very able to maintain the basic hygiene. Shower, bathe daily which means EVERYDAY and don’t forget your deodorant. Nobody wants to smell your B.O. Young men should take pride in them selves. Now don’t forget to put things back because you don’t have a maid and oh yes you can clean that bathroom especially behind that toilet seat; when you get your own who do you think is going to do that for you, remember you don’t have a maid. Bring your clothes down to the laundry room, remember dark clothes here, medium color there and white put them here; dark cold water, medium warm water (or sometimes cold) and white hot water (or sometimes warm); who do you think is going to do this, you don’t have a maid.
Shannon
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Monday, August 11, 2008
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Hey Shannon,
Thanks for posting this here, I enjoyed reading it. Can I make a suggestion? I love how you always talk about how you tell your son that everybody doesn't love him the way his mother loves him...I can hear you saying that, and it is so funny and also so true...do you think it would fit into this piece?
Chelsea
I really enjoyed doing this writing assignment as well. It was so easy to read the piece and find a way to make it your own. All the writing ideas and things we have discussed makes me wish I had older students to do all this stuff with.
Hi Shannon: As the mother of 2 girls, let me just say how much their future wives will appreciate your attitude.
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